Collaborative Wiki
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August
22-26, 2011: Welcome Back!
Monday, August 22: A Day
Tuesday, August 23: B Day
Wednesday, August 24: A Day (Computer Lab)
Thursday, August 25: B Day (Computer Lab)
- Poem o' the Day: "Writer
Waiting" by Shel Silverstein
- Welcome to our home away from home!
- Computer Lab Orientation
- Book Reviews: I hope you finished your
homework!
- Utah Write: Baseline Essay
(45 Minutes) -- Go!
- Following Instructions: Whatever you don't finish today in class is
homework!
- Wiki Instructions
- Many of you had wiki accounts with Mr. Wood or Mrs. Barney last year,
so if you can remember how to login, you don't need to do the first
7 steps.
- Here's something
scary! (See me for more details...if you dare!)
- Finished early? You must be pretty smart! You should check
this out:
- Honors
English, Anyone?
Friday, August 26: A Day
- Poem o' the Day: O
Captain, My Captain!
- (Close read it!)
- Writing Notebook: The Finer Details
Copy this quotation on the first page of your WN:
"You learn to write by writing. The only way to learn
to write is to force yourself to produce a certain number of words on
a regular basis."
--William Zinsser
Writing Notebook Guidelines:
Copy these under the quote on the first page.
- Date every entry and assignment.
- Skip only one or two lines between entries. Do not
put each entry on a separate page!
- Never remove any pages from your writing notebook, even after
they have been scored.
- Writing Notebooks are to remain in the classroom at all times!
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- Now title the next page Genre, and let's
get started!
(In-class Writing Notebook Assignment)
- Genre Intro: Who would
have thought there was so many ways to write about one guy? (If
you don't finish this in class, it is homework!)
- Using the personal list in your Writing Notebook, let's collaborate
on this big, collaborative Genre
List
- Wiki Instructions:
If you did not get around to creating your own page in the Notebook
Wiki, do so by next time! I need to see your page title (in the
proper format: 08JaneD) in the margin with the rest of your class. Be
sure to capitalize correctly.
- Reminders:
Bring a reading book to class from now on!
If not done already, review disclosure
with a parent & submit survey.
- Goodreads
Instructions: Follow them by Friday, September 2nd!
August 29- September 2, 2012
Monday, August 29: B Day
- Poem o' the Day: O
Captain, My Captain!
- (Close read it!)
- Writing Notebook: The Finer Details
Copy this quotation on the first page of your WN:
"You learn to write by writing. The only way to learn
to write is to force yourself to produce a certain number of words on
a regular basis."
--William Zinsser
Writing Notebook Guidelines:
Copy these under the quote on the first page.
- Date every entry and assignment.
- Skip only one or two lines between entries. Do not
put each entry on a separate page!
- Never remove any pages from your writing notebook, even after
they have been scored.
- Writing Notebooks are to remain in the classroom at all times!
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- Now title the next page Genre, and let's
get started!
(In-class Writing Notebook Assignment)
- Genre Intro: Who would
have thought there was so many ways to write about one guy? (If
you don't finish this in class, it is homework!)
- Using the personal list in your Writing Notebook, let's collaborate
on this big, collaborative Genre
List
- Wiki Instructions:
If you did not get around to creating your own page in the Notebook
Wiki, do so by next time! I need to see your page title (in the
proper format: 08JaneD) in the margin with the rest of your class. Be
sure to capitalize correctly.
- Reminders:
Bring a reading book to class from now on!
If not done already, review disclosure
with a parent & submit survey.
- Goodreads
Instructions: Follow them by Friday of this week!
Tuesday, August 30: A Day
Wednesday, August 31: B Day
- Poem o' the Day: "The
Hand" by Mary Ruefle
- Writing Notebook (WN) Assignment -- Reflection #1: How is 9th
grade treating you so far? Give examples! Be specific! (80+ words)
- Turn in Genre
Questions / Discuss Responses
- Have a reading book in class!
(Set up your Goodreads account
by Friday!)
- Did you forget an assignment today? Maybe
this would help!
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- Check out the massive and growing Genre
List! Make sure yours (in your Writing Notebook) is complete! Add
to it as necessary!
- Assignment (due next week): Find something to share aloud with
the class. It can be any genre
of text, but it can't be more than one minute long. We need to hear
each others' voices early in the year to humanize ourselves for one
another. What you share does not have to be memorized! You
just have to read it loudly and clearly, so we can all hear you. Find
a good one!
- Common Core,
Unit 1: Literary
Elements and the Short Story
(A
helpful link!)
- Notes on Literary Elements: In your own notebook, keep track
of definitions for all the literary terms we will cover over the next
three or four weeks. Do not lose your notes! You will need them for
a test!
- Concept: Plot (MPT,
pp. 2-3); Common Core Standard RL 9-10.5
- WN Quickwrite: All good stories have to have a conflict or
problem, and that is often caused by the villain (bad guy, antagonist)
of the story. Write about the most fascinating villain you have ever
encountered.
- Read "The Most Dangerous Game" by Richard Connell (MPT,
pp.5-22)
- Homework: Finish reading the story and answer all parts of
questions 3, 4, 6, and 8 (in writing) from page 24. On the other side
of the paper, draw and label a plot
diagram for the story that illustrates all the plot elements of
"The Most Dangerous Game."
Thursday, September 1: A Day
Friday, September 2: B Day
- Turn in/Discuss Homework: Wrap up "TMDG" & Plot (Reading
Quiz)
- WN Reflection #2: From your massive list of genres,
choose one that begins with the letter M and fill a page writing
in that genre.
- Poem o' the Day: "A
Dream Within a Dream" by E. A. Poe
- And so we begin our "unit within a unit": As part of the
short story unit, we will focus on the works of Edgar Allan Poe for
a few days. "Oh, you're gonna love this....heh-heh-heh-heh!"
said the homicidally insane narrator.
- Notes of Literary Elements: Add these to your notes.
- Concepts: Narrator, Point of View, Tone (MPT, pp. 148-149)
- Common Core Standards RL 9-10.1 & RL 9-10.5
- WN Quickwrite: "Revenge is a dish best served cold."
Write about a time you wanted revenge. (Did you get it?) -- Not
1st period
- Read "The Cask of Amontillado" by Edgar Allan Poe (MPT,
pp. 173-179)
- In-class Assignment: Write your response to "Fortunato's
Version" on page 181.
- Book Review Assignment (due one week from today):
Take your finished
worksheet and turn it into a complete written draft of a proper
book review. Staple the worksheet to the draft and turn them in on September
8/9.
- Here is a sample worksheet
about Mockingjay.
- Here are two sample
book reviews about Mockingjay.
One is by a pro, and the other is by someone your age. This is the quality
you should strive for in your own book reviews this year!
- Here is some more
information about book reviews.
- Here are some other good
(complete) book reviews.
- Assignment may be handwritten (legibly) or typed in your own words.
Do not copy anything from the Internet.
- Remember also to be looking for a 1-minute reading you can share aloud
with the class.
September 5-9, 2011
Monday, September 5: Labor Day
- No School: Labor Day Holiday
Tuesday, September 6: A Day
Wednesday, September 7: B Day
- WN: Practice Paraphrasing
- What is paraphrasing?
- How is it different than summarizing?
- Paraphrase the first few paragraphs of this
article.
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- Poem o' the Day: The
Raven: Read and Listen
- Pair up.
- Translate
(paraphrase) an assigned stanza into regular modern English (no rhyme
-- just story)
- Present "Translations" to the class so everyone knows the
whole story.
- Create a Plot Diagram for The Raven
(Remember: It is narrative poetry, so it tells a story; therefore,
it has a plot.)
- Make notes on your own copy of the poem so you will remember what
it all means because you're going to...
- ...work on The Raven Study Questions,
due next time!
Thursday, September 8: A Day (Computer Lab)
Friday, September 9: B Day (Computer Lab)
- Poem o' the Day: "Annabel
Lee"
- Book Review due!
- Quick Review of "Tell-Tale
Heart" (Listen to a professional reading!)
- Keep your copy of "The
Raven" handy!
- Remember "The
Cask of Amontillado" from last week?
- Maybe you've heard of "The
Black Cat"?
- Check out "Annabel
Lee," too (and
this glog!)
- Utah
Write: Seminar Question (Poe's Narrators)
You will have one hour to address this question in an essay: Consider
Poe's first-person narrators ("The Cask of Amontillado," "Tell-Tale
Heart," "The Raven," "Annabel Lee," and/or
"The Black Cat"). Are they reliable (normal? sane?) narrators?
Cite at least three reasons to support your argument, and include quotations
from the original texts to illustrate that your reasons are valid and
correct. You can access the text of the stories and poems from
the links above. Keep them open as you write. Quote them to support
your argument. When you finish, submit your essay for scoring.
- Follow-up: You will have two weeks to view the Utah Write tutorials
and revise your essay (you get two more chances) to achieve the highest
score you can. DO NOT make minor changes and resubmit today! That would
be a waste of one of your chances. You have time, so use it wisely.
Learn from the tutorials. Then try again. And again.
Common Core Standards RL.9.2, RL.9.3, SL.9.1, SL.9.3, SL.9.4
- Utah Write Tutorials: How to Improve that Score
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- Goodreads/Wiki:
Last Chance for Setup Points
September 12-16, 2011
Monday, September 12: A Day
Tuesday, September 13: B Day
- Turn in Raven Study Questions
Common Core Standards 9.RL.2 & 9.RL.5
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- Present 1-minute readings
Common Core Standards 9.SL.2 & 9.SL.6
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- WN Reflection #3: What did you learn about some of your classmates
from hearing their readings? What do you think they learned about you
based on your selection and presentation? How comfortable are you speaking
in front of groups? Discuss and reflect. (90+)
Common Core Standard 9.W.2
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- Poe Biography: Terror of the Soul
-- You will use information from this resource to develop the essay
about Poe's narrators. Respond to study questions and take notes as
needed.
Common Core Standard 9.SL.2 & 9.RIT.7
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- Reminders/Due Dates:
- You have until September 23rd to view the prescribed
tutoruials, revise, and resubmit (two more times!) your Utah
Write essay about Poe's
narrators.
- Book Talks and Goodreads Reviews will begin soon! Keep reading!
Wednesday, September 14: A Day
Thursday, September 15: B Day
- Edgar Allan Poem o' the Day: "Alone"
- Finish Poe Biography (Video:
"Cask of Amontillado")
- (Writing Notebooks have been scored. Start this on the next blank
page.)
WN Reflection #1: What scares you? Do you enjoy scary movies
and books? Why do you suppose they are so popular? Are your fears more
fantastical or realistic? Is there a difference between being afraid
and being nervous or anxious? How do you conquer your fears? Discuss
fear and all its variations. (90+)
- WN: These assignments are to be completed in the Writing Notebook:
- Analyzing Informational Text (about Poe): Read MPT,
183-190
- Make a Timeline for the events described in "Poe's
Final Days" (pp. 184-186)
- Practice Test (6 questions, pp. 191-192): Evaluate responses/Discuss
Common Core Standards 9.RIT.2
- Book Review Review + New
Book Review Outline Forms
If you are reading a book for your science term project, you will
get a different form from your science teacher. Turn that form in to
your science teacher and post your formal, written review on Goodreads.
Let me know when you have done that! (Don't wait 'til the last minute!)
- Share Good Examples
- Basic Problems with First Book Reviews: All summary, no evaluation;
no effective attention getter/introduction; no "voice" --
just sounded like a report or a checklist of the items on the outline;
did not include all the elements on the outline forms (quotes, themes,
etc.).
- Remember that you are writing a REVIEW, not a report. The plot summary
should only take a couple paragraphs. The rest needs to be your evaluation
of the book, and it needs to include all the elements on the outline
form, including quotations from the book.
Friday, September 16: A Day
- Poe CRT Practice: (Formative Assessment)
on separate paper
- Back to Literary Elements: Review
what you know about plot.
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- Poem o' the Day: "Stopping
By Woods on a Snowy Evening" by Robert Frost
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- Notes on Literary Elements: Add these to your notes.
- Concepts: Setting (MPT, pp. 48-49)
- Common Core Standards RL 9.1 & RL 9.5
- WN: Setting
Activity
- 1) Study the numbered pictures. For each, do the following:
- a) Write a description of one of the characters. Who is s/he?
How does s/he feel at this moment in time?
- b) Write a description of the setting. Use as many sensory details
as possible.
- c) Identify what it is in the setting that contributed to the
way you perceived the character. If the setting had been different,
how would your perceptions have changed?
- 2) Choose one of the setting pictures and write a first-person (present
tense) descriptive narrative that begins, "I am sitting/standing/walking...."
(choose an action verb). In the course of your description, include
how the setting makes you feel. Include as many sensory details as possible.
- 3) Discussion: Consider the stories and poems we have already read
as part of this unit. How does the setting contribute to each one? Could
the story take place in a different setting? If so, how would the story
be different? Would it be as effective? Now think about a book you have
read or a movie you have seen in which the setting was very important
to the action and outcome of the story. Discuss with an "elbow
partner" those stories and explain WHY the setting was so important.
Share with the class.
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- Your Goodreads account should accurately reflect what you are currently
reading, and I should see you bringing the book to class...especially
next Thursday!
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- Don't forget to watch the tutorials and revise the Utah
Write essay about Poe's narrators by next Friday!
September 19-23, 2011
Monday, September 19: B Day
- Poe CRT Practice: (Formative Assessment)
on separate paper
- Back to Literary Elements: Review
what you know about plot.
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- Poem o' the Day: "Stopping
By Woods on a Snowy Evening" by Robert Frost
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- Notes on Literary Elements: Add these to your notes.
- Concepts: Setting (MPT, pp. 48-49) &
Imagery (MPT, pp. 402-403)
- Common Core Standards RL 9.1 & RL 9.5
- WN: Setting
Activity
- 1) Study the (3 or 4) numbered pictures. For each, do the following:
- a) Write a description of one of the characters. Who is s/he?
How does s/he feel at this moment in time?
- b) Write a description of the setting. Use as many sensory details
as possible.
- c) Identify what it is in the setting that contributed to the
way you perceived the character. If the setting had been different,
how would your perceptions have changed?
- 2) Choose one of the setting pictures and write a first-person (present
tense) descriptive narrative that begins, "I am sitting/standing/walking...."
(choose an action verb). In the course of your description, include
how the setting makes you feel. Include as many sensory details as possible.
- 3) Discussion: Consider the stories and poems we have already read
as part of this unit. How does the setting contribute to each one? Could
the story take place in a different setting? If so, how would the story
be different? Would it be as effective? Now think about a book you have
read or a movie you have seen in which the setting was very important
to the action and outcome of the story. Discuss with an "elbow
partner" those stories and explain WHY the setting was so important.
Share with the class.
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- Your Goodreads account should accurately reflect what you are currently
reading, and I should see you bringing the book to class...especially
on Friday!
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- Speaking of Friday, don't forget to watch the tutorials and revise
the Utah
Write essay about Poe's narrators by then!
Tuesday, September 20: A Day
Wednesday, September 21: B Day
- Utah
Write Revisions of Poe's Narrators Essay due Friday!
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- Poem o' the Day: "Cartoon
Physics, Part 1" by Nick Flynn
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- WN: Reflection #2 -- If you were a cartoon character, which
one would you be? Why? What do you have in common with that character?
Discuss all your cartoon-ish proclivities. (85+)
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- Grammar Punk Rock:
Parts of Speech Review -- Nouns
(You can't play the game until you know the parts of speech!)
- Nouns: common,
proper,
concrete,
abstract,
countable,
collective,
compound,
possessive,
and gerunds
- DO NOT LOSE THIS
PAGE OF NOTES!
- Common Core Standard L.9.3
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- GP POS (Noun) Review: Look at one of the photographs used in the Setting
activity. On a piece of paper, draw two intersecting lines to make four
squares (one for each category: people, places, things, and ideas).
In each square, list the nouns by category that you see in the image.
Note whether they are common/proper, abstract/concrete, countable/non-countable,
collective, possessive, or gerunds. (L.9.3)
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- Notes on Literary Elements: Add these to your notes.
- Concepts: Characterization (MPT,
pp. 84-85)
- Speech: What character says
- Actions: What chartacter does
- Appearance: How character looks
- Inner Thoughts: What character thinks
- Others' Opinions: How others feel about the character
- Inference: Using observations (evidence) to draw conclusions about
something not directly stated.
- Common Core Standards RL 9.1 & RL 9.5
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- "Thank You, Ma'am" by Langston Hughes, (MPT, pp.
87-90)
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- Assignment: When Roger asks, "You gonna take me to jail?"
Mrs. Jones replies, "Not with that face, I would not take you nowhere."
What does this response tell you about her? Support your inferences
by citing other things she says and does.
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- Finish your final revision of the Utah
Write Essay about Poe's Narrators! Print the copy with your highest
score and turn it in on Thursday/Friday!
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- BRING YOUR READING BOOK next
time!
Thursday, September 22: A Day (Midterm)
Friday, September 23: B Day (Midterm)
- TURN IN A PRINTED/SCORED COPY OF YOUR UTAH WRITE ESSAY ABOUT POE'S
NARRATORS. Make sure your name and period are on it.
- Writing Notebook: Topics
-- Look over this list and copy 20 of these topics that you think you
could write about. Number them from 1 to 10. Someday you will write
about each of them.
- SSR: While Thompson's away, the kiddies will...READ! The book you
bring needs to be the one you say you are reading on Goodreads! For
this and for reading silently today, you will get points. Don't blow
it!
- Reflection #3: Write for 10-15 about a topic of your choice
from the list you made at the beginning of the period. (100+)
September 26 - September 30, 2011
Monday, September 26: A Day
Tuesday, September 27: B Day (Explore Test - 45-minute classes)
- Poem o' the Day: "Preteen
Pretext"
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- Grammar Punk Rock:
Parts of Speech Review -- Verbs
(MPT, pp. 1050-2)
- How 'bout a Quick
Pretest?
- Verb Chart (Keep this
with your other grammar handouts/notes!): principal parts of verbs,
especially irregular
past and past participles;
simple, perfect, and progressive tenses; agreement of subject and verb,
especially with collective nouns
- Common Core Standard: L 9.3
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- Article
of the Week: Cell Phones (2009)
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- CLOSE READ -- All together! What's the genre? Purpose? Audience? Bias?
Mark areas of confusion. Circle unfamiliar words. Argue with what you
disagree with. Indicate what alarms you. Write your "inner dialogue"
with the article in the margins, so it looks kinda like this
one...but better and more. Show that you are thinking about and
interacting with the text, not just sounding out the words as your eyes
pass over them. Close reading is forcing yourself to pay full attention
long enough to make meaning of what you're reading.
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- Consider the purpose and audience of these two items:
- "Protect
your brain!"
- Skeptoid Podcast on Cell
Phones (2008)
- WN: Write a one-page reflection about cell phone radiation,
the discussion we had, and why you will or will not change your behavior
based on what you read and heard. When you are done, choose two sentences
you would be willing to share aloud. Then do it.
- Homework: Re-read the AoW
on Cell Phones with an especially critical eye. Mark it up with
indisputable evidence of a close reading. Paraphrase two things: 1)
the sentence in the second paragraph that begins "But some researchers..."
and 2) the quote by Dr. Louis Slesin at the bottom of the front page.
- Can't get enough of this? Try these:
- "This is Your
Brain on Cell Phones" (2008)
- Cell
Phones and Kids (Blog, 2011)
Parent-Teacher Conferences, 3:45-7:15 P.M.
Wednesday, September 28: A Day (Computer Lab)
Thursday, September 29: B Day (Computer Lab)
- Turn in Annotated AoW (Close Reading)
- SRI Reading Test (30 minutes)
- Goodreads: What does a complete
book review look like? (It's not just a summary! It has to address
the items on the outline
form!) Here
is Brigitte's latest! (She went through this last year.)
- Q: How many book reviews do we have to do?
- A: At least two per term; more if you read very short books.
- Q: By when?
- A: Whenever you finish the books...but before the end of the term.
- Argumentation: The Expectation for Ninth Graders
- The
difference between Persuasion, Propaganda, and Argument
- For the Record: Argument is the best! That's what I want you to do
in your writing for this class!
- Common Core Standards: RIT 9.2, RIT 9.6, RIT 9.8, SL 9.1, SL 9.2
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- Wiki
Assignment #1: Propaganda, Persuasion, Argument, Reflection
Due (on Wiki) October 4th!
- Common Core Standard: W 9.1
Friday, September 30: A Day
- Poem o' the Day: "My
Life" by Joe Wenderoth
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- Notes on Literary Elements: Add these to your notes.
- Concept: Symbolism (MPT, pp. 340-341)
- "The Scarlet Ibis" by James Hurst (MPT, pp. 344-354)
- Assignment (front of page): Answer questions 6-10 (page 356)
with thoughtful, complete responses.
- Common Core Standards RL 9.1 & RL 9.5
- GP POS (Verb) Review (back of page): Study the paragraph (p.
345) that begins "As he lay all the time in bed...." Identify
all the verbs and name the tense of each verb you find. Your Verb
Chart handout will come in handy.
- Common Core Standard: L 9.3
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- Turn in the page with the questions on the front and the verb
review on the back.
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- WN: In the story you just read, the writer creates a lush,
vivid setting by using sensory details. Choose a place and describe
it completely. Use sensory details to make your place seem real. (100+)
- Share aloud.
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- Don't forget the Wiki
Assignment due October 4th!
October 3-7, 2011
Monday, October 3: B Day
- Poem o' the Day: "My
Life" by Joe Wenderoth
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- Notes on Literary Elements: Add these to your notes.
- Concept: Symbolism (MPT, pp. 340-341)
- "The Scarlet Ibis" by James Hurst (MPT, pp. 344-354)
- Assignment (front of page): Answer questions 6-10 (page 356)
with thoughtful, complete responses.
- Common Core Standards RL 9.1 & RL 9.5
- GP POS (Verb) Review (back of page): Study the paragraph (p.
345) that begins "As he lay all the time in bed...." Identify
all the verbs and name the tense of each verb you find. Your Verb
Chart handout will come in handy.
- Common Core Standard: L 9.3
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- Turn in the page with the questions on the front and the verb
review on the back.
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- WN: In the story you just read, the writer creates a lush,
vivid setting by using sensory details. Choose a place and describe
it completely. Use sensory details to make your place seem real. (100+)
- Share aloud.
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- Don't forget the Wiki
Assignment due Tomorrow!
Tuesday, October 4: A Day
Wednesday, October 5: B Day
- Poem o' the Day: "Remember
When"
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- AoW Feedback: Why didn't I get full
credit? (Check these
examples!)
- Wiki Feedback: Propaganda, Persuasion, Argument -- Like
this!
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- WN: Write 100+ words in response to one of the topics you copied
into your Writing Notebook on Sept. 22/23.
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- Notes on Literary Elements: Add these to your notes.
- Concept: Theme (MPT, pp. 208-209)
- How to find and state a story's theme (See Book
Review Format.)
- "The Sniper" by Liam O'Flaherty (MPT, pp. 212-215)
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- Assignment (in Writing Notebook):
- 1) ___________ wanted __________, but ________________,
so ______________.
This illustrates that __________________________________.
- 2) Answer question 8 on page 217.
- 3) Grammar Link Practice 1 (Participial Phrases) on p. 219
- (Check out the Mangled Modifiers before you start!)
- 4) Grammar Link Practice 2: Use today's WN reflection to complete
this; rewrite the reflection based on the instructions on p. 219.
- Common Core Standards RL 9.1 & RL 9.5, L 9.3
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- Grammar Punk Rock:
Parts of Speech Review: Pronouns (How are they related to nouns?)
- AoW
-- Close Reading due next time (Don't write reflection yet!)
Comprehension, Summarizing, and Evaluating
Thursday, October 6: A Day
Friday, October 7: B Day
- WN: Write 100+ about the AoW
you close read. (BTW: Turn that in!)
- Poem o' the Day: "Los Ancianos" by Pat Mora (MPT,
p. 294)
- Notes on Literary Elements: Add these to your notes.
- Concept: Irony (MPT, pp. 284-285)
- Situational Irony, Dramatic Irony, Verbal
Irony
- "The Gift of the Magi" by O. Henry (MPT, pp. 286
- 292)
- What kind of irony is most apparent in this story?
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- Grammar Punk Rock:
Parts of Speech Review: Modifiers
- Adjectives (What do they modify? What questions do they answer?)
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- Adverbs (What do they modify? What questions do they answer?)
- Copy the paragraph on page 289 that begins "So now Della's beautiful
hair...." Circle all the adjectives and draw arrows to the nouns/pronouns
they modify. Put a square around the adverbs and draw squiggles to the
words they modify.
October 10-14, 2011
Monday, October 10: A Day
Tuesday, October 11: B Day
Wednesday, October 12: A Day
Thursday, October 13: B Day (Reflections Contest entries due!)
- Poem o' the Day: "Missing Sunshine"
by Elizabeth Thompson
- This is merely a review of concepts you have seen many times before.
- Notes on Literary Elements: Add these to your notes.
- Review: Figurative Language (MPT, pp. 428-429) -- Simile,
Metaphor, Personification
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- This is new:
- Notes on Literary Elements: Add these to your notes. (Last
One!)
- Concept: Style -- Diction, Tone, Mood (MPT, pp. 496-497)
- Common Core Standards: RL 9.4
- "A Sound of Thunder" by Ray Bradbury (MPT, pp 499-509)
- Bradbury's Style (WN): Find and copy and example of each of
these from the story:
- Vivid, descriptive image
- Figure of speech (non-literal language)
- How would the story be different if Bradbury didn't use language like
this? Would you like it better without all the stylistic flair, or would
it be less interesting? Discuss his writing style.
- WN: If you could travel in time, which direction would you
go? Who would you want to meet? What would you do on your journey? Discuss.
(100+)
- Grammar Punk Rock:
Parts of Speech Review: Interjections & Mr. Morton
- (For the Last Time: What is a Sentence?)
- Study your notes on Literary Elements: Text next time!
Friday, October 14: A Day
- Unit Test on Literary Elements
- Poem o' the Day: "The
Grammar Lesson" by Steve Kowit
- Grammar Punk Intro: One time through,
slowly!
- "The Rules" of Language: Conventions
(2 more green handouts to never lose)
- Assignment: "Roll the Bones!"
- There are two "practice boards" on the back of the GP
Intro handout
- In Class: Complete the top one as an "all-together-now"
practice
- Homework: Complete the bottom one based on the dice roll for your
class period. We'll share 'em next time!
-
October 17-21, 2011
Monday, October 17: B Day
- Unit Test on Literary Elements
- Poem o' the Day: "The
Grammar Lesson" by Steve Kowit
- Grammar Punk Intro: One time through,
slowly!
- "The Rules" of Language: Conventions
(2 more green handouts to never lose)
- Assignment: "Roll the Bones!"
- There are two "practice boards" on the back of the GP
Intro handout
- In Class: Complete the top one as an "all-together-now"
practice
- Homework: Complete the bottom one based on the dice roll for your
class period. We'll share 'em next time!
- Term Ends Next Week!
- Have you been reading regularly?
Tuesday, October 18: A Day
Wednesday, October 19: B Day
Thursday, October 20: Fall Recess
Friday, October 21: Fall Recess
October
24-28, 2011
Monday, October 24: A Day
Tuesday, October 25: B Day
- Poem o' the Day: "The
Student Theme" by Ronald Wallace
- Grammar
Punk: Comma Rule #2
Use a comma to separate adjectives that modify the same word.
- WN: Critical but Informal Approach to Reading Something New
and Weird and Different:
"'Repent, Harlequin!' Said the Ticktockman" by Harlan
Ellison
- What good readers do (and what YOU will do today):
- Pre-reading/Predicting (KWHL/SQ3R): What questions do you
have? What does this title imply? (Here are a couple
hints!)
- Vocabulary -- Which unfamiliar words are worth stopping to look up
and which can be ignored or figured out from context?
- Visualize!
- Organize! (This story is told out of order.)
- Summarize!
- Now go look at these
again. They might
make more sense.
- Save the last word for me!
(Find the most significant lines in the story. Why are they significant?)
- Other Options:
- Review/Re-read: Story Pyramids (Topic: one word; description:
two words; setting: three words; conflict: four words, etc.)
- ________________ wanted ___________________, but ______________________,
so _____________________.
- What does it mean? OR Why does Mr. Thompson love
this story?
- Homework: Book Reviews due on Goodreads next time!
- Just so you can't say I asked you to do something I wouldn't do, here
is my
latest book review.
- And here
is Sierra's.
- And here
is Jenna's.
- And here
is Katie's.
- You need two (2) of these posted to Goodreads by Wednesday, and I
need the outline
format in the "Book Review" box in the classroom, so I
will know to go look at them. (Duh!!)
Wednesday, October 26: A Day
Thursday, October 27: B Day
- Term "Final Exam"
- This is your term test, so take it seriously...especially if you already
have a low grade and/or you haven't done your book reviews. Speaking
of which, while you are writing, I'll be calling you up one at a time
to talk about your reading, extra credit, and your current grade.
- Log in to Utah
Write.
- (Follow in-class instructions to get to the correct topic.)
- 30 minutes: Write a persuasive first draft based on your own opinions
and impressions. Treat this as a timed assignment like the DWA. Submit
the essay for a first score.
- 30 minutes: Revise your essay so that it changes from simple persuasion
to ARGUMENT. (Remember
the difference?) An argument requires you to include logical (scientific)
evidence and sources. Where will you get this evidence? Remember these?
And this? Or this?
(Make sure you say in the body of your essay where you got your supporting
information.) Submit for a second score.
- 15 minutes: Review the Utah Write suggestions and "finer details"
of the writing. Check for run-ons and comma splices. Fix them using
Comma Rule #1. Correct spelling and usage. Read it over for fluency.
"Polish" it!
- Submit for a final score.
- Now that you know what you are to do, here's the topic:
- The school's current homework policy states that homework should
not exceed two hours on a school night and should not be assigned before
holidays or weekends. Administrators at the school want these restrictions
removed. Are you for or against restrictions on the amount of
homework that can be assigned? Be sure to develop your response
fully.
- Poem o' the Day: "Grammar"
by Tony Hoagland
- If you are one of those people who just refuses to spend any time
or thought on writing, you don't care what your grade is, and you are
"done" with 30 or more minutes to spare, you should go do
one of these things:
- Add me as a friend on Goodreads
so your reviews and updates are automatically sent to me.
- Go finish that Wiki
assignment on Argument/Persuasion/Propaganda that you never completed
and were hoping I wouldn't score. (I'm going to!)
- Review the Grammar
Punk Hall of Fame and add a couple sentences of your own.
Friday, October 28: A Day (Last Day of First Term)
- Poem o' the Day: "The Road Not Taken" (MPT, p.
315)
- All this goes in the Writintg Notebook:
- Quickwrite (p. 314): Think of a time you made a significant choice
in your life. Now imagine you had made a different choice. How would
your life be different? (Identify the choice and write three sentences
in response.)
- Copy the poem into your Writing Notebook.
- Answer questions 1, 4, & 5 on page 318.
- Tone: Insert an adjective (to describe the tone of the poem) into
line 16 before the word sigh: "I shall be telling this
with a __________ sigh...."
- WN: Reflection/Preflection -- The first term is over. How did
it go? What are your plans and goals for the second term? Discuss. Explain.
Elaborate. Pontificate. (100+)
-
- Grammar
Punk: Comma Rule #3
Use commas to separate non-essential interrupting elements in a
sentence.
- Article
of the Week: Homework. Do not write the reflection! We'll do that
part next time.
- See you next term!
"Did
I miss anything?" This is the most annoying question students who have
been absent can ask. My usual sarcastic reply is something like this: "Oh,
heck no! We knew you were gone, so we just sat around all day and looked
at each other. You don't really think I'm going to assign work on a day
you're not here, do you?" So, in order to keep everyone (students
and their parents) apprised of what exactly is going on each day in class,
I am going to put it here. Check back often! We
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